There is a good amount of work overall on your blog. You have a good amount of imagery collected for PPP and have started to annotate well, just make sure you say a bit about why you selected each one. Your DP blog clearly shows the journey from receiving the brief to your final product and this is well explained, you could maybe develop some ideas a bit more but as we have only had a few briefs it is difficult to say how much development you should do/is necessary.
Your DP blog shows alot of documentation and great visuals of your work, particularly your idea development. It was great looking through all the images as it clearly showed where your work was going and what you have considered throughout the briefs. I would maybe make your annotation a bit more to-the-point and analytical and a little bit less descriptive.
there are a lot of images, and annotation, you could explain why you have collected the images on the PPP task. Lots of images to illustrate your DP is good, however, some of them need aligning because they are randomly dotted on the page.
I think that you have written enough and collected enough images to show your thought processes and ideas as well as clearly written and explained through your text to aid the images.
There is a good amount of work overall on your blog. You have a good amount of imagery collected for PPP and have started to annotate well, just make sure you say a bit about why you selected each one. Your DP blog clearly shows the journey from receiving the brief to your final product and this is well explained, you could maybe develop some ideas a bit more but as we have only had a few briefs it is difficult to say how much development you should do/is necessary.
ReplyDeleteYour DP blog shows alot of documentation and great visuals of your work, particularly your idea development. It was great looking through all the images as it clearly showed where your work was going and what you have considered throughout the briefs. I would maybe make your annotation a bit more to-the-point and analytical and a little bit less descriptive.
ReplyDeletethere are a lot of images, and annotation, you could explain why you have collected the images on the PPP task. Lots of images to illustrate your DP is good, however, some of them need aligning because they are randomly dotted on the page.
ReplyDeleteI think that you have written enough and collected enough images to show your thought processes and ideas as well as clearly written and explained through your text to aid the images.
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