For the final crit for the collaborative brief, I had created the presentation boards, we also had printed materials, I think that our presentation looked very bright and vibrant, the pink background really made the boards stand out, they looked quite girly, and this was appropriate for the brief and its target audience.
From the crit we received quite a lot of feedback in the form of post it notes.
The feedback was mainly positive and there was a few constructive criticisms that I had not considered before but I agreed with I was happy to have gained this feedback and I was glad that we had everything to show, as it meant we could receive as much feedback as possible.
Positive points
The boards are vibrant and attractive
They are appropriate to the target audience
The concept is strong
Constructive Feedback
The boards are too busy
The type is hard to read as it is too long (too many words per line)
The leaflet needs reprinting as there are spelling mistakes and they don't fold.
I will work upon this feedback for the final boards, to address these issues I will change the layout of the type. And I will also spread out the work onto more boards. I also knew that the leaflet wasn't perfect before the crit but this is obviously something others noticed too and it definitely needs reprinting.
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