In this critique, we got into pairs and went around a table of work, four pieces. I feel from looking at my feedback forms some people had put more effort and thought in than others. Again because I regard one of my feedback forms as unhelpful, I would of liked an extra one or two forms from a separate couples.
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- I would of liked the pieces to of been on thicker stock, I did try to put it onto cartridge paper, but the colours ran. I didn't want to put it on antique white as I had done previously as the creme look of the paper made it look warm and happy, which wasn't appropriate for my message.
- I could try put the copy into first person and make it seem more conversational.
- Consider the use of the word murder, perhaps erase it or change the word itself.
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